The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The line graph highlights, the rate of openings and closings of the
shop
in a particular country in the timeline between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, both the numbers of opening and cloasing
had faced a huge Correct your spelling
closing
fluctions
in a specific period of time.
In the Correct your spelling
fluxions
year
2011, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
shop
opened 10000. Change to a plural noun
shops
However
, this
trend
faced downward in
the Change preposition
from
year
2012 until 2014. After which it fell sharply to it's
lowest point about 3000 in 2018.
The Correct your spelling
its
trend
of shop
closing is higher than trend
of Add an article
the trend
a trend
shop
opening. Clsoing
starts Correct your spelling
Closing
with
6000 in the Change preposition
at
year
2011 and continued it's
upward Replace the word
its
trend
till 2013. After that, the trend
steep
dope down to 0 in the Wrong verb form
steeped
year
2015. In the next year
it revived and kept Add a comma
,year
continue
Wrong verb form
continuing
it's
Replace the word
its
trend
till 2018.Submitted by kaynath87 on
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