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The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
#shops #country
The line graph highlights, the rate of openings and closings of the
shop
 in a particular country in the timeline between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, both the numbers of opening and
cloasing
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closing
 had faced a huge
fluctions
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fluxions
 in a specific period of time. In the
year
 2011,
number
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a number
the number
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 of
shop
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shops
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 opened 10000.
However
,
this
trend
 faced downward
in
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from
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 the
year
 2012 until 2014. After which it fell sharply to
it's
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its
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 lowest point about 3000 in 2018. The
trend
 of
shop
 closing is higher than
trend
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the trend
a trend
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 of
shop
 opening.
Clsoing
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Closing
 starts
with
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at
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 6000 in the
year
 2011 and continued
it's
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its
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 upward
trend
 till 2013. After that, the
trend
steep
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steeped
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 dope down to 0 in the
year
 2015. In the next
year
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,year
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 it revived and kept
continue
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continuing
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it's
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its
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trend
 till 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, year, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 6 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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