Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present.

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hai anu , I hope you are doing good ,
firstly
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like to congratulate you .
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finally
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I heard
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news that a newborn
baby
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arrived at your home . I am so happy
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take care of your health and
baby
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.
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, I am waiting to see you and the little angel .
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time there is a big surprise to a
baby
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that I have purchased the cradle for the
baby
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,
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moreover
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this
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is so special one and
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the most
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one comfortable
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I brought
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online with more specifications easy to carry when you go out eagerly waiting to see the
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.
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, I am planning
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weekend to visit you
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to your comfort so let me know is a right time to come waiting for your reply yours beloved ,
mounika
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Monika
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hand-knitted
  • texture
  • personal touch
  • uniqueness
  • effort
  • warmth
  • proposing
  • casual
  • comfortable
  • acknowledging
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