Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays the number of jobless constantly increasing and become one major worry in society. In

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essay, I will explain the main reasons

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the problem and offer some effective solutions. First of all, the main cause of the increase

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unemployment is lower

education

background. The fact that

education

impact to national economy and occupation of society

is always be

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true. The lower

education

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people achieved, the

less

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job opportunities they will have.

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, many

manufacture

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companies require college or higher

education

degree

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for some positions,

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many job seekers in developing country are only graduated from secondary school. The best action to solve

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cause is by providing professional training programs for fresh graduates,

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can be done by both government and companies. The purpose of these trainings

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to enrich the job seekers with specific knowledge and prepare their readiness with professional skills needed by the users.

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, another major cause of

jobless

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rate is

because

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age

qualification.

Age

restriction might become

unusual

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reason for

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concern, but it become

consideration

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in numerous

manufacture

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companies.

These establishment

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prefer to hire freshers with

age

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between 19 and 24 for operational divisions, when they reached 25 years old or above the company

then

will

regenerating

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their

staffs

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with new hire employees. The possible solution to cope

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issue is the company can provide permanent staff positions to the employees who have excellent performance after their temporary working contract. In conclusion, the high rate of employment is a big problem that affects society today. It’s mainly caused by lower

education

background and

age

qualification and the effective solutions can be done with professional

trainings

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and permanent contract option.