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Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?

#unemployment #society
Nowadays the number of jobless constantly increasing and become one major worry in society. In
this
 essay, I will explain the main reasons
of
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 the problem and offer some effective solutions. First of all, the main cause of the increase
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 unemployment is lower
education
 background. The fact that
education
 impact to national economy and occupation of society
is always be
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 true. The lower
education
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 people achieved, the
less
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 job opportunities they will have.
For example
, many
manufacture
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 companies require college or higher
education
degree
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 for some positions,
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 many job seekers in developing country are only graduated from secondary school. The best action to solve
this
 cause is by providing professional training programs for fresh graduates,
this
 can be done by both government and companies. The purpose of these trainings
are
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 to enrich the job seekers with specific knowledge and prepare their readiness with professional skills needed by the users.
Secondly
, another major cause of
jobless
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 rate is
because
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age
 qualification.
Age
 restriction might become
unusual
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an unusual
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 reason for
this
 concern, but it become
consideration
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 in numerous
manufacture
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 companies.
These establishment
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 prefer to hire freshers with
age
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ages
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 between 19 and 24 for operational divisions, when they reached 25 years old or above the company
then
 will
regenerating
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 their
staffs
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 with new hire employees. The possible solution to cope
this
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 issue is the company can provide permanent staff positions to the employees who have excellent performance after their temporary working contract. In conclusion, the high rate of employment is a big problem that affects society today. It’s mainly caused by lower
education
 background and
age
 qualification and the effective solutions can be done with professional
trainings
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 and permanent contract option.
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