Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: -say how you feel about his/her performance -give details of your music related activities -explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

Dear Maggie, Hi Maggie, I knew you from your Youtube channel and I can say that I am already in love with your gorgeous sound. Jazz has been my favourite genre forever, and I can not put my ears away from your cover song! The first time I knew about you is from your cover song titled "Just the Way You Are" by Bruno Mars. I can sense an immense spirit and passion in your voice and
that is
what I love most about you. So a little bit about me, my name is Steve Pagari and I am a saxophone player. I
make a cover song on my Youtube channel named "SaxWithMe". I have been making saxophone cover songs for about 7 years, and still counting. I have
done a few collaborations with other musicians and singers. With that said, I would really like to have a collaboration with you. I am pretty sure that your gorgeous voice will get
along with
my saxophone playing. It will be a huge blast for our viewers too
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since there is a lot of request from them! Please let me know if you are interested. Cheers, Steve Pagari
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
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