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Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

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People strive for greatness. They give everything they can for them to achieve their ultimate goals. Achievements like money, fame and assets are
basis
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 of a prosperous person. Having all
this kind
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these kinds
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 of worldly materials, is
this
 really what we aim for? People woke every day and challenged life. The reason
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 our existence is to find our essences and comprehend
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the demands of reality yet failure always
come
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 and
tell
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 to us that we are still not worthy. Well,
this
 phenomenon is natural because of our conditions as human beings – temporal and finite. Failure is a must for us
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 great and greatness demands ourselves and give everything we have. Exhausting ourselves to learn new things is the condition for us to achieve everything we wanted.
Thus
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 the world is like a game of will and mindset in which people has only one goal to become what they wanted to be. In my opinion, a great
man
 should not be measured by his properties
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 by his values and principles in life. When a
man
 mastered
his self
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, it is natural for him to achieve everything.
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, a
true
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 successful
man
 should be measured by his fruitful experiences in life. It is always about the cultivation of
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, spiritual and physical
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 of a person.
To conclude
, for a
man
 to flourish and become a great leader in
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society, he should be enriched with wisdom. Money, fame, and assets are only temporal but what is permanent is the self that we built through vigorous experiences.
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