Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

People strive for greatness. They give everything they can for them to achieve their ultimate goals. Achievements like money, fame and assets are

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of a prosperous person. Having all

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this kind

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these kinds

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of worldly materials, is

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really what we aim for? People woke every day and challenged life. The reason

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our existence is to find our essences and comprehend

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the demands of reality yet failure always

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to us that we are still not worthy. Well,

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phenomenon is natural because of our conditions as human beings – temporal and finite. Failure is a must for us

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great and greatness demands ourselves and give everything we have. Exhausting ourselves to learn new things is the condition for us to achieve everything we wanted.

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the world is like a game of will and mindset in which people has only one goal to become what they wanted to be. In my opinion, a great

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should not be measured by his properties

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by his values and principles in life. When a

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mastered

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, it is natural for him to achieve everything.

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successful

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should be measured by his fruitful experiences in life. It is always about the cultivation of

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, spiritual and physical

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of a person.

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, for a

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to flourish and become a great leader in

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society, he should be enriched with wisdom. Money, fame, and assets are only temporal but what is permanent is the self that we built through vigorous experiences.