An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages or disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online.
The number of
people
who are likely to purchase online have
been rising recently compare with what used to be. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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there are both Add a comma
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pros
and cons can
be seen in Correct pronoun usage
that can
retailer
and big companies which experienced more online deals, and Fix the agreement mistake
retailers
people
who are tend
to purchase their Change the verb form
tend
requirement
online, especially young Fix the agreement mistake
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people
who define majority
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buyer
. In Fix the agreement mistake
buyers
this
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I am going to explain numbers of advantages and disadvantages.
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the
some business owners Remove the article
apply
who
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whom
they
are going to launch their business, but have been deprived of enough money sources so that online Correct pronoun usage
apply
sale
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sales
been
seen as one of the main Add a missing verb
have been
pros
from perspective
of independent stores Add an article
the perspective
while
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snap the bargain, On the other hands from the sight of high street name brand, having been known by numerous of Add the particle
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people
, significant improvement have
been brought about by Change the verb form
has
this
method being done by people
, what I mean by this
is that people
can order their requirements just by surfing in the Internet with no need any physical stores, so they can save their time and run away from traffic, there are pros
for two side of dealing . In
addition
internet helps both little shops and vast Add a comma
,addition
one
for having more sell, no matter which products have been sold and Correct pronoun usage
ones
people
bring high beneficial
from that
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benefits
argument
, sellers must tackle with Add an article
the argument
an argument
large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
people
who have just virtual identification. Let
use some Add a missing verb
Let's
buyer
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buyers
for instance
, who return their
product which had Change the word
the
sent
to them Add a missing verb
been sent
as a result
of some terrifying matter or maybe some unavoidable one, like mismatch
between the exact color or style that had shown in Add an article
a mismatch
picture
and reality so that online shops must undertake Correct article usage
the picture
such
issues and be ready for satisfying vast range of people
without seeing them. The bigger store, the bigger problem. What I mean by that is
about
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apply
this
fact that they can destroy their brand Correct determiner usage
the
by
just Change preposition
with
little
mistake. Correct article usage
a little
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hand
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people
must trust on
some seller pages and send money to them before they receive their orders so it is Change preposition
apply
risk
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people
may lost
their money. Totally both buyers and sellers should consider all aspects when they put Change the verb form
lose
be lost
step
in Add an article
a step
the step
this
method.
Companies and customers need to weigh up all pros
and cons of online deal
. I believe eventually the benefits in terms of having social currency for companies and easy buying without any Fix the agreement mistake
deals
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labour
while
have
entitlement, outweigh any negative. For supporting Change the verb form
having
this
clause, there are numerous shops that say: Had we invested in social media for
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