write a letter to your friend missing the date you have planned.tell them how you tried to contact them but it didnot worked out either.

Dear Ahmed , How are you, hope you doing very well, I wanted to tell you about the
time that I missed our date but ,unfortunately , I didn'
have a chance to talk with you about it.
, I don'
believe I ever ruined a date for us before,
, doing that
weekend made me feel upset especially, as far as I'm concerned, we were both excited about going out and seeing the new trend Marvel movie in the cinema. My mother got very sick the
few days and we entered her in hospital on Sunday which accidentally happened to be on our scheduled date ,
, I couldn'
come sadly,
, my phone battery has died that's why I didn'
a chance to contact with you either. Eventually, I wanna tell you that I'm free
weekend if you'd like us to go out to make up for you. Yours sincerely, Yousif.
Submitted by yusif_salih on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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