Your friend has a problem at work. He has written to you a letter and asked for advice about the ways to solve it. Write to him. In your letter: • Tell him that you understand the problem; • Tell about similar case that you experienced in the past; • Suggest possible ways to solve the problem. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear Ahmed, Hope
this
letter finds you in great health and mental peace, sorry to hear about your problem with your laptop
although
I might be able to help you with that regard. From what I have seen that you have a trouble network connection in google chrome,
as a consequence
, you can't use
this
application properly and will affect you negatively since your graduation study work counts on searching online. As far as I'm concerned, I had the same problem two years ago so I went to the Al-Amani store , they have many services and one of the amazing things about them is they have a special sector for technological devices issues,
therefore
, they fixed my laptop very quickly. I suggest you go there as soon as possible so things won't go
further
badly, they open in the morning at 8 a.m. Lots of love, Yousif.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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