Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

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Dear Megi, How are you?I hope to have

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day.I a

writting

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writing

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letter because Kejdi

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me that you came to live in my country for 6 months.When you came here I can help you

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everything.

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,I suggest you can live in

Tirana

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because I live here.

Tirana

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is a big city and you can go everywhere.

Tirana

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offers you more opportunities to do everything.

Tirana

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have

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of shops,

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restaurant,

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.I can help you to find a house but you can leave

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me because I leave alone.

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,some of my friends can help you to get a good job.You can work

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in the restaurant,you can work taxi,you can work in the hotel reception and some other job.

Tirana

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can

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you a

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of jobs.

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,the people are friendly and quiet.They can help you

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everything.They can learn you about the job.They can suggest you a

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of places when can visit. I am

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you to

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my country because we can have a

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of fun. Best wishes, Xhesjana Mydini

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future lives. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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