You recently visited a dog park and were disturbed by the lack of control the owners imposed on their dogs, making them dangerous for everyone around. Write an email to your local municipality in about 150-200 words. Your email should include the following things: • Describe the situation • Explain why the dogs were a danger to others • Propose a solution

Dear local municipality, The main purpose of my writing today is to lodge a complaint about the
dog
park
in our town, that I visited with my family
last
weekend.
To begin
with, I was playing with my kids when a gigantic
dog
without a leash suddenly appeared behind my back. My kids were very scared by
this
aggressive barking creature and started crying. It's very important to respect the rules of each other in our society. Big creatures like
this
dog
, walking around the
park
without control,
may be
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not only a source of danger but
also
a cause of various viruses for humans. Based on what I have provided you today, I may suggest a few options to solve
this
problem.
Firstly
, I would strongly recommend increasing the amount of penalty for breaking the rules in our
park
.
Furthermore
, it will be a good idea to move the
dog
park
far away from the children's playground. I am looking forward to seeing how my suggestions translate to prompt actions from your side. Your kind cooperation would be most appreciated. Sincerely, Alexey Ivanov.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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