You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain why you changed jobs • Describe your new job • Tell him/her your other news Write at least 150 wordsWrite at least 150 words

Dear Jennifer, Long time no talk! How are you? I hope everything is going
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with you. I wanted to share some exciting news with you. I recently switched jobs and now I'm working at a new company called Global Solutions Ltd. The reason for changing jobs was mainly for career advancement. I felt that my previous job didn't provide enough growth opportunities, so I decided to explore new horizons. Global Solutions is a well-established company known for its innovative approach and diverse projects. I am thrilled to be part of their team. My new role is as a Senior Marketing Executive. I am responsible for developing and implementing marketing strategies to promote our products and services. It's a challenging position, but I enjoy the dynamic nature of the work. The team is fantastic, and I've already learned a lot from my colleagues. In other news, I recently adopted a cute little puppy named Charlie. He brings so much joy and happiness into my life. We go for long walks in the park, and he has become quite popular with the
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. I would love to catch up and hear about your latest adventures. Let's plan a get-together soon. Take care and looking forward to your reply! Warm regards, Emily
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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