The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates information about a particular place in 1986 and how it is changed now.
Overall
, previously it was more of a farmland, and it was not modernized, which was later converted majorly into residential areas. In 1986, there was farmland in a northeast direction after crossing the bridge, which is now seen as a residential area, and a primary school near it
also
has extra buildings now. Across the road, in a northwest direction there were shops and a post office, among these post office remained in the same place
whereas
, shops were replaced by houses and a branching road.
Moreover
, beside the primary school, there was a garden with large homes, which is now converted into a retirement home.
In addition
, the farmland near river stroke has
also
been transformed into a housing area, and opposite the garden area, and a square road is created around which housing is done.
However
, the bridge on the north side remained the same until now.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • residential buildings
  • commercial buildings
  • infrastructure
  • recreational facilities
  • population growth
  • living standards
  • green spaces
  • environmental concerns
  • transportation networks
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • economic development
  • land use
  • agricultural
  • vacant lots
  • developed properties
  • functionality
  • economic landscape
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