The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates information about a particular place in 1986 and how it is changed now.

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, previously it was more of a farmland, and it was not modernized, which was later converted majorly into residential areas. In 1986, there was farmland in a northeast direction after crossing the bridge, which is now seen as a residential area, and a primary school near it

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has extra buildings now. Across the road, in a northwest direction there were shops and a post office, among these post office remained in the same place

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, shops were replaced by houses and a branching road.

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, beside the primary school, there was a garden with large homes, which is now converted into a retirement home.

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, the farmland near river stroke has

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been transformed into a housing area, and opposite the garden area, and a square road is created around which housing is done.

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, the bridge on the north side remained the same until now.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
residential buildings
commercial buildings
infrastructure
recreational facilities
population growth
living standards
green spaces
environmental concerns
transportation networks
connectivity
accessibility
economic development
land use
agricultural
vacant lots
developed properties
functionality
economic landscape

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