Many people believe that Zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos brings.

modern era, people tend to rely on mobile devices and works to fulfil their need and wants. The public claimed that the
has become a place, where people would not it appreciate, and it has
overtaken some of society's resources where people claimed that
should be demolished. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the subject with examples and demonstrate my viewpoint.
To begin
with, in the olden day, government promote that the
is a place to educate the community. In
, we can have first-hand connections with animals, from the context we can
understand the nature of animals and how they interact with the world, but since technology devices have overtaken our daily life. The public could not see the purpose of visiting the
. For
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instant, there is some news that nations have been attacked by the animal
they visiting the
makes the crowd feel, they can see the animal from devices rather than take the risk to visit the physical places.
On the other hand
, society often argues that the cost of taking care of the animal is higher than we expect by maintaining the place and cares provided for the habitat is presented.
For example
. the money that we spent on wildlife actually can implement as a health fund for society, to promote health and well-being activities.
, the citizen prioritizes their needs rather than agree to invest money into animal habitats.
supported by world wildlife organisations as an animal should have the right to live freely in their natural habitat compared to the cell that they live in
To sum up
, the issues that the
brought are it spent ample of the authority's money and resources as the government has put the fund into supporting the
and providing a purposeful location for the
to be located, which can be used for other purposes which can be more beneficial for the citizen.
should be demolished and give wildlife the right to live for their own sake.
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