In the future al the cars. Buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles wil be passenger

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future
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many
transport
, public
transport
and trucks are driven by
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the auto
an auto
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auto pilot
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autopilot
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. The only
people
going to
qnywhere
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anywhere
inside these
transport
will be
passenger
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passengers
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. And it helps
to
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people
because
people
don't spend energy to control
transport
. On the one
hand
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it is
usefull
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useful
to
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people
that
is
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are
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decrised
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decreased
to get on the radar. Since there are many types of radar and
sat
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up several
camera
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to
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the highway
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highway
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.
In
addition
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these types of
transport
protect
any
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against any
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problem or crash with other
transport
. Because
this
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these
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kinds of
vhicles
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vehicles
are
coverd
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covered
with
protector
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things. For
instence
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instance
people
can control
a long
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along
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with the
auto pilot
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autopilot
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on the way.
On the other hand
unexpected
lost
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loss
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of control over the
auto pilot
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autopilot
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. Because all
of
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things
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the things
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are
make
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by hand and they are not perfect which is made by
people
. In
short
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all of
transport
and truck is used to need of
people
. Since
such
a
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transport
a means of transport
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transport
are made to do
people
's mainly.
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