Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter,  - invite him or her to a public event in your country   - describe the public event   - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.

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Hi Annie, It's been a long time since we met

last

time before you left Myanmar 3 years ago. I still remember those days of our university life when we spent the best days of our life. I am writing to invite you to the convocation party for my master’s degree here. As you know, I am going to graduate in coming December.

First,

let me tell you the details. Our convocation is going to take place on the 15th of December and will be commenced between 10 am to 5 pm. I really want you to join us as I would like to celebrate my achievement

together with

my beloved people. The ceremony will be held in the auditorium hall of the University of Yangon and all graduates from Arts major will be provided with their hard-earned degrees.

Furthermore

, I have planned your whole trip to northern Shan State. After the convocation day, we will go for a 5-day trip to Taunggyi, Kalaw, Inle and Pintaya where we'll try our hands on exciting activities like trekking and horse-riding. Afterwards, we'll go for a long drive to Mandalay to enjoy the beautiful scenery of Mandalay Hill and take a flight back to Yangon. I want you to be part of

this

important day of my life. I cannot wait to see you after a long time. See you soon, Ella

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter, - invite him or her to a public event in your country - describe the public event - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter,  - invite him or her to a public event in your country   - describe the public event   - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.