A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: give details of what you know about his company explain your current situation give your answer to the offer and explain why

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Dear Thomas, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter in regard to the

position

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of senior HR Manager in your company where you referred me. First of all, I would like to thank you for offering me the

position

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. It is my immense pleasure to have an opportunity to join one of the highly reputable organizations. Precisely, I am aware of the tremendous growth your firm has achieved in technological services over the years. It is well-known for its software solutions and has multiple opportunities for each domain

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as Java developers, consultants and quality analysts.

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, it has a long-term vision to recruit a lot of vacancies for technical, human resources and administration as well.

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, I am sorry to inform you that I cannot join before the next three months. As I am currently working here in a managerial

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, I have to comply with a longer notice period of 2 months on resigning which is non-buyable.

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, I would like to take a break for a month after my resignation in order to take care of some family matters. I am providing you with a confirmation to join the firm as the

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offered to me is my dream job where I explore more in my career. Please kindly discuss my situation with your team and let me know the

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update. Yours sincerely, Ella Khin

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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232 words

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