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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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 as a global lingua franca facilitates cross-cultural communication.
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 every year. A group of people thought that
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 of
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 of other local
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 from many countries.
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 values and traditions. More specifically, the prevalence of
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 sense of inferiority of
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 which
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 level but it will finish the jobs of translators and interpreters if more and more
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 economy. Turning the other side,
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 of technology, science,
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, artificial intelligence and so on are published in
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 of nationwide tourism. It removes the barrier of
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 life easier.
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, all over the world business meeting are held in
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the English
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language
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. Which is a necessary skill in
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 is a universal
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 enable
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 communication.
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 of
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 communication eventually outweigh the cons.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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