The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

In
this
age of
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,
English
as a global lingua franca facilitates cross-cultural communication.
As a
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many other
lesser known
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languages
are
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every year. A group of people thought that
English
will be
only
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international
language
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be spoken in future. It
have
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both pros and cons, in
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essay I will discuss both.
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with, one of
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con
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of
English
as a global
language
is
vanishing
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the vanishing
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of other local
languages
from many countries.
Moreover
, each
language
back by a
culture
; when people stop speaking a specific
language
the
culture
attach
with
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that
language
also
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and not only
culture
but
also
values and traditions. More specifically, the prevalence of
English
may cause
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sense of inferiority of
culture
among speakers of other
languages
.
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language
probably people stop speaking Latin the
culture
attach
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also
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. In second place,
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good that there is only
language
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which
is spoke
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on
global
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level but it will finish the jobs of translators and interpreters if more and more
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disappear it is not good for
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economy. Turning the other side,
English
become a second worldwide
language
. Research papers in
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the field
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field
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of technology, science,
medical
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, artificial intelligence and so on are published in
English
.
In addition
with
English
is a
language
of nationwide tourism. It removes the barrier of
language
,
also
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make
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life easier.
Furthermore
, all over the world business meeting are held in
English
, to add on, it is an
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law that every employee must have
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command of
English
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the English
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language
. Which is a necessary skill in
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world.
Lastly
,
English
is a universal
language
and
its
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enable
cross cultural
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communication.
Moreover
, I assert
languages
other than
English
must be respected. Personally, I believe that
advantages
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in
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of
cross cultural
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cross-cultural
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communication eventually outweigh the cons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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