Some people think that watching sports in one's free time is just a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Sports play a crucial role in

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pysical

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physical

and mental health of individuals

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its

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paramount importance, without any

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society is divided into two groups as per

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mindset of different people.

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many people believe that

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away free

time

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watching sports is

benificial

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beneficial

but at the same

time

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for others it's only

the

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waste of

time

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and they reject

this

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notion. Both arguments will be analysed before a suitable conclusion is declared. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad thing to be shared in its

favor

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; first of all, game enthusiasts believe that

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sports on TV enhance their experience and provide them

oportunity

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opportunity

to learn new skills and practice these in daily and professional life;

also

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researche

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research

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conducted in

USA

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is in favour of notion and demonstrate that how most players ended up as winner just by coping moves that they watch in their free

time

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hightened

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heightened

lightened

benefits of

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sport

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sports

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shows can clearly be seen. Moving towards the second argument, some populace

argue

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that it is

importan

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important

to spend spare

time

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some useful activity rather than just looking at players. They believe that

sport

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is just

waste

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a waste

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time

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which is totally against the

researches

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as different

researches

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researchers

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concluded that

sport

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is essential for everyone and we can improve our abilities

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through

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sport

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sports

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shows.

This

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evidence makes it

thus

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doubtful that

pay

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attention to

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sport

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programs kills

time

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. To recapitulate

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apply

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the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach

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apply

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the

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gist that the pros of watching

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sport

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sports

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dominate the cons,

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I argue that the viewing

sport

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free

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time

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valueable

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valuable

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

270 words

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communal unity
stress relief
economic impact
sedentary lifestyle
emotional investment
teamwork
discipline
healthier lifestyle
fantasy sports
interactive experience
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