The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The given chart illustrates four European Countries spent on six consumers of goods.
Overall
, Britain spent much on photographic film
, toys
, CDs
, and perfumes
. France spent more on photographic film
and CDs
. Italians spent more on toys
and Germany on perfumes
, tennis
racquets
, and perfumes
.
To begin
with, the highest spending for British people is on photographic film
at 170 and the lowest is on tennis
racquets
and personal stereos
at 155. Britain spent 167 on toys
. Next is for CDs
at 165 and perfumes
at 160. France spent 165 on Photographic film
which is the highest and tennis
racquets
be the most unpopular one at 145. The second rank is Cds
at 157. Next is Toys
at 156. The perfume and personal stereos
on the same amount at 147. Next,
the highest spending in Italy is on Toys
at 155 and 150 for CDs
and Personal stereos
. The same proportion happens to photographic film
, perfumes
, and tennis
racquets
at 155. Finally
, German people spend on photographic film
, perfumes
, and tennis
racquets
147. The second rank is perfumes
and tennis
racquets
at 150. Next is personal stereos
at 146 and spend less on toys
and CDs
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