The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The given chart illustrates four European Countries spent on six consumers of goods.
Overall, Britain spent much on photographic
perfumes. France spent more on photographic
CDs. Italians spent more on
toysand Germany on
To beginwith, the highest spending for British people is on photographic
filmat 170 and the lowest is on
stereosat 155. Britain spent 167 on
toys. Next is for
CDsat 165 and
perfumesat 160. France spent 165 on Photographic
filmwhich is the highest and
racquetsbe the most unpopular one at 145. The second rank is
Cdsat 157. Next is
Toysat 156. The perfume and personal
stereoson the same amount at 147.
Next,the highest spending in Italy is on
Toysat 155 and 150 for
stereos. The same proportion happens to photographic
Finally, German people spend on photographic
racquets147. The second rank is
racquetsat 150. Next is personal
stereosat 146 and spend less on
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