The unlimited use of cars May cause many problems. what are those problems? in order to reduce the problem, should we discourage people to use car?

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People are preferring their own vehicle over public transportation and
this
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last
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decade.
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problem
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are being caused because of
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such
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as air pollution ,traffic jams,late commute and so on.The solution is simple,
government
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to encourage public transportation and inform vehicle
users
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about to effect of detrimental .
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cars
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users
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need to understand that it is expensive and it is effected our environment.
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the introduction of high trolls in urban areas, and parking will be limited over the high price to park a private
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.
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discourage
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people who
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use
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car
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.
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cars
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users
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will be informed about the effect of detrimental and
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privet
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car
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tax set will be high because of that it could demotivate
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users
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. The
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should invest in public
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because it
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to encourage to use public
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, Air condition buses and trains will be
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apply
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cheap rate for commuters. Making
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apply
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public
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will be more attractive
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as
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, light and most
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is good buses
driver
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. It will be satisfied commuters for everything. Less congestion in
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is important, if
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face the challenge
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most of the
poeple
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people
will
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use public
transpotation
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transportation
.
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,
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by
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privet
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transport
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rapidly increases and it is
a
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apply
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challenging for
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discouraging
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people. If
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take small action
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it will decrease
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by
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