Some people believe that watching TV bad for children while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays
children
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are very modern and they use phone
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and computer
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and watch
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.Some people think that
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is not good
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other people believe it has positive effects. In my opinion these views , there are some negative and positive impacts. On the one hand , there are several reasons why watching
TV
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is beneficial for
children
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.
Firstly
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video is informative and learning everything. It serves as
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of information
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that can
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help more creative and familiar with the world.
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, television can make studying enjoyable it has educational
cartoons
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children
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love to watch . Most teachers prefer to have
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a computer
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set in their classroom to help them watch
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programs
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that are
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educational for
children
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.
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, there are
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a number of shows
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have negative impacts on
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psychology. There are a lot of programs about violence ,
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and drugs
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and these can be unsuitable for kids.
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, watching
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have beneficial and educational effects for
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more
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watching
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rather than reading books,
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or doing
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homework.
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,
more
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the more
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children
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watch
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, the less they exercise. In conclusion,
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watching
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has good effects on
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children
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teach
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.
However
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, I believe
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is more detrimental
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children
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary behavior
  • unrealistic perceptions
  • creative pursuits
  • social development
  • emotional development
  • constructive content
  • screen time
  • parental guidance
  • critical thinking
  • active learning
  • age-appropriate
  • media literacy
  • family bonding
  • moderation
  • perceive
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