some people believe tertiary education should be free, but others say universites should charge students. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that academic education should be without charges and tuition,
whereas
others believe that
students
should be charged for tuition and admission by
universities
. I strongly agree with the former opinion. On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that education should be free for
students
. Research findings confirm that poverty can lead to failing to find talent and there is
strong
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correlation between
money
and being successful. Many youths failed to enter
university
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the university
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because they can not afford that.
Thus
, they find a job in order to achieve
money
and their path
changed
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completely and they never find their talents.
For instance
, I have participated in many courses recently which improved my skills and talents. These courses were so expensive and it is not affordable for everyone.
On the other hand
, another group of people claim that entering
tertiary
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level should not be free. They insist that
universities
should use
this
money
as an important source of revenue in order to pay their expenditures.
However
, I do not find
this
argument convincing as
universities
can use a different source of revenues
instead
of gathering
money
from their
students
.
For example
, many prestigious
universities
nowadays are working with different institutions and governments in order to carry out their task in an efficient way and they gather a sizable amount of
money
from
this
way and use
this
money
as their revenue.
To conclude
, in my view, I agree with
free
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education idea for everyone
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any level.
Therefore
, many people failed to find their talent because of
money
and their future change totally.
Moreover
,
universities
are able to gather
money
by working on many companies’ projects
instead
of achieving
money
from their
students
.
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