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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are selling • describe the furniture • suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,

#minutes #furniture #friend #date #addresses
Dear Javad, Hope you are doing fine, long time
I
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since I
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didn't see you. I'm writing to tell you that I find a new job in Quebec so I'm just selling my house and all of the equipment as you completely know my house has decorated with precious furniture, but I have to sell all of them. So as you told me before you were searching
a good equipment
Remove the article
good equipment
a piece of good equipment
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 for your home,
therefore
 I have decided to suggest my furniture maybe
this
 will help you. You clearly know that I just have used those pieces only for 10 months so I guarantee that all of them are unique
moreover
 they have high quality to use for a long time.
Finally
, you are really welcoming my house on 20 July to see those pieces again and we can spend time together too. I will be happy to see you again. Regards, Rahman
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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