In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Wht might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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People
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in some countries believe that it is essential for
people
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to own a
home
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rather than renting one.Living in a self-owned
home
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gives a feeling of comfort,stability and security.From my point of view whether it is a positive or negative
situation
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depends on many factors. When owning a
home
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you have the ability to hold full ownership and disposition of the house.
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you can easily build or decorate the house without asking anyone else.
People
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owning a
home
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dont
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don't
have to worry about the landlord nor do they have to pay a monthly rent.It
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people
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to save a large amount of money . All in
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am strongly convinced that owning a
home
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is a positive or a negative
situation
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is quite subjective.Since it depends on the condition of
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people
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the people
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.For
people
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who are capable of buying a house,their
home
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is their property and owning a
home
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is a positive
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for them.
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However
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not everyone can buy a
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If they were intolerant
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they
would have to borrow money for a very long time.
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addition
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there will be so many
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that they have to incur In conclusion ,from my point of view owning a
home
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can be a
pleusurable
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pleasurable
experience if done without
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.
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contrary
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it can be turned into a negative
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when
people
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buy a
home
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by the way of borrowing money.
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