A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin. Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter: – Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council – Request that the person returns your bin immediately – Inform the person of what further actions you will take should they not return your bin

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Dear Ml I hope

this

letter finds you well. My name is Iman and I am your neighbour. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that yesterday you have taken my garbage

bin

which was right next to my door. Let me clarify

this

situation, I got

this

bin

from the local council

since

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when

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I moved in. Please you can kindly request one from them as they source it and it won't take you a long time to get it. I really need my

bin

as soon as possible because I have a garbage pile-up at my home and I want to get rid of it because flies have started to show up and honestly it is annoying. unfortunately, If you don't give back my

bin

, I will report you to the management of the building. I hope you reply back as soon as possible or Just put it back next to my door. Thanks for your time and consideration. Regards, Iman

Submitted by imanmuhamed.3089 on Sat May 27 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

164 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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