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Some think that computer games are dangerous for children in every way, while others think that computer games help children’s development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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 modernized era, computers have become a day-to-day necessity. When it comes to playing
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 on a computer, there's a considerable bias. One school of thought believe that computer
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 promote teenagers' development,
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, another group descends the same. Playing
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games
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 can have both effects on a child's development. Considering the positive impact
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we can say that playing on-screen
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 can promote teenagers typing skills as
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 require active usage of keyboards on computers. There are many
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 which can help youngsters with developing skills like team play or management by actively motivating other members to complete the given tasks. The are a number of educational
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 available on the internet as well that can help them with their study. As a coin has two sides, playing
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 too has an adverse effect. First of all, it is worth mentioning that teenagers nowadays excessively play
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 on a computer which can have a malicious impact on their minds. As children devote most of their time to playing
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 they can be more aggressive or become easily irritated.
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, when youth is vulnerable to
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, their eyesight can
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 be reduced and they become couch potatoes and became lethargic. They will not participate in physical outdoor activities.
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, they become more introverted and can find themselves struggling with forming social circles. and interacting with people. Excessive screen time
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 leads to autism in toddlers nowadays which increasingly became a major challenge for their parents to combat.
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, I would say that everything has two sides so as playing
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games
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. Though, it is crucial for a child's development to some extent still it has numerous negative impacts if excessively used. It can be harmful to the mental and physical health of toddlers
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 youngsters.
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