✅️ Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing.To what extant do you agree or disagree?

🔅The utilization of the open

ares

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areas

area

for planting or housing disputable issue.In my

opinion

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I agree that

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more gardens and woodland.

This

is

vital

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role for

humans

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life

.I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons. 🌳

To begin

with, more

plants

should be planted everywhere.Variety

plants

assist

to

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urban and towns

for

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to

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keep clean air.There is

not

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no

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pollution

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in people

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people

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people's

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lifestyle.

For example

, extra

trees

shade

are

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is

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generated when more

trees

are planted in open areas,which not only decorate

for

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road

,

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but

also

helps to save normal temperature .

Also

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it

provide

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that children do not play in the sun. 🪴

Additionally

,

trees

produce more oxygen from themselves.They can help to cool down the streets.

Trees

that are most planted as homes for birds, squirrels and bees are oak sycamore. 🌴

In addition

, nowadays, one of the biggest world problems

associated

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the

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environment, so more

plants

are important several urban

to

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apply

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lifestyle

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lifestyles

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. 🍀

However

, planting more

trees

in urban areas brings nature into cities which is

bebeficial

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beneficial

to people without access to

rural

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the rural

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zone. 🌻

On the other hand

,

plants

are assemble

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as a part of individual

life

.

Life

can not be formed without them.

Therefore

, we need to preserve cultivated

plants

.

Trees

which are a part of nature should be cultivated everywhere in the world. 🌵

To sum up

,

due to

mass urbanization the need for

trees

and gardens

have

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arastically

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dramatically

increased to improve the quality of

life

in overcrowded cities.

Moreover

,

trees

and gardens are natural

reserve

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that can help protect against various

man -made

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man-made

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disasters.