✅️ Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing.To what extant do you agree or disagree?

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ares

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areas

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for planting or housing disputable issue.In my

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more gardens and woodland.

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role for

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life

.I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons. 🌳

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with, more

plants

should be planted everywhere.Variety

plants

assist

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urban and towns

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keep clean air.There is

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pollution

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people

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lifestyle.

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trees

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generated when more

trees

are planted in open areas,which not only decorate

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helps to save normal temperature .

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that children do not play in the sun. 🪴

Additionally

trees

produce more oxygen from themselves.They can help to cool down the streets.

Trees

that are most planted as homes for birds, squirrels and bees are oak sycamore. 🌴

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, nowadays, one of the biggest world problems

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the

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environment, so more

plants

are important several urban

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lifestyle

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However

, planting more

trees

in urban areas brings nature into cities which is

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beneficial

to people without access to

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zone. 🌻

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as a part of individual

life

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can not be formed without them.

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, we need to preserve cultivated

plants

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which are a part of nature should be cultivated everywhere in the world. 🌵

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due to

mass urbanization the need for

trees

and gardens

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arastically

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dramatically

increased to improve the quality of

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in overcrowded cities.

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trees

and gardens are natural

reserve

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that can help protect against various

man -made

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disasters.

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3Word repetition
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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✅️ Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing.To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?