The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
picture illustrates the production process of
sugar
in a hierarchy diagram. There are seven steps to produce
sugar
in
this
graph, but
this
essay will describe those in two main parts. The first part is extracting the
sugar
juice and the second part is purifying it. The first segment begins with patiently growing
sugar
cane
for 12 to 18 months. After that, the ripped
sugar
cane
should be picked either by hand or by machine.
Lastly
, all the selected canes get squeezed by a crushing machine to pull out their sweet water. The second segment is the purifying steps.
First,
pour all the juice through a limestone filter in order to filter out the remaining
cane
debris. It is followed by heating the juice until the consistency changes from watery to thick liquid or
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syrup.
Then
, centrifuge the syrup to separate the
sugar
crystals from the solutions.
Finally
, collect all the crystals, dry them with sunlight and cool them with the proper fan. In conclusion, it needs approximately more than a year to produce
sugar
from
sugar
cane
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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