Some people think that university students should pay all the expenses for their studies because a university education only benefits students themselves and not a society as a whole discuss both persepctives and give your opinion ?

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time some people believe that knowledge which is taken by enlistment at educational institutions is not important to the public. Because students after graduating pay more attention only themself. So
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should pay all the
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,essay I will explain both perspectives and give my own opinion. First of all, doubtless education is developing and, the student is interested in it, so they spent lots of time learning some helpful knowledge. And there is one problem which pupil struggles with within the exercise period, which is paying all the
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governments should pay attention to more healthcare than education. Let me explain it,
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, an average of 3.000 enlistments at the
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in my country's
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recover their charge. Imagine if per head spent an average of 150$ a year in my ,city it would be Approximately 450.000$ one year and the
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needs to give that cash ,
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admission had better work simultaneously studying because after graduating they may not appreciate the value of the bill.
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, in some ,countries young who graduated from the
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pay more attention to their family than society. They do not want to build helpful buildings in public places
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they spend checks to build homes for themself. Education,
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, plays a very essential role in our life.
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, on average 60 or 70 % of people in my rustic are not elite so to subject abroad or in my ,bucolic they need help from the
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. If they cannot help the junior may attempt to crimes to make capital, of course, it happens thanks to the difficulty in their life.
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, it could be caused by an increasing number of crimes or may reason to leave their homey and migrate to another bucolic which could help them to course. In conclusion, responsible is becoming disappearing more and more among enlisted after or during the period of the
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. Taking knowledge brings benefits only themself so all the
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are paid by the
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. It should be paid for by students.
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