Some people think that schools should switch from print textbooks to digital textbooks on tablets, while others disagree. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

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No doubt,
Education
is the moment from darkness to light
however
nowadays individuals debate with each other ,first say digital textbooks and smart classes are good ways to teach students ,
whereas
opponents are against
this
statement .
Therefore
I stand with the latter opinions and in
this
,essay I will briefly explain both viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with the first motion as people want to shift
paper
education
to Technology-based
education
.Needless to say , the
paper
makes from trees which is why thousands of trees are cut to make a few pieces of
paper
to reduce
this
, scientists want to change the
way
of teaching .So that they can save the ecosystem.In fact , the 3d
way
of teaching school-going children can help to learn them very quickly and remember them for a long time .
For example
, at
this
time ,in my nation number of
schools
used smart classes to clear the concept to students that they cannot understand in textbooks .
Nonetheless
,other
schools
thought that textbooks are the only
way
to teach the student in a proper
way
.Needless to say , sometimes computers are not working properly and might reset all the data in a few seconds which is not good for children as they make every note related to the chapter on their school tablets .
For instance
, in American
schools
most work is done on laptops and iPad which
schools
provide to complete homework assignments , sometimes these devices are not working and students are left behind in study and face many other problems. To analyse
this
thing,
paper
Education
is best . In conclusion, I believe that
although
e-
education
is not a bad idea to clear the context on the student's mind sometime it might create big problems for them so ,
paper
education
is the best
way
to teach .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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