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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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Depicted in the given plans are the blueprints of the
airport
 in the present day and prophesied appearance after being developed in the upcoming year.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
airport
 will be massively improved next year. In the current condition, the building is divided by two entrances for visitors both departures and arrivals. In the Departures chamber, there is a receptionist desk for attendants check-in, yet provides a cafe for those who intend to buy some coffee and snack during their waiting. Moving forward, there are passports checked by
airport
 security.
In contrast
, the arrival sites are apparently empty, except for passport control customs. There are 8 gates, and visitors can walk to the gates. Turning after development ahead, the port is the most significant improvement which will be added 10 gates. Irrespective of that, the attendants will not move on foot since the sky train is provided there. The departure area is slightly changed, especially the positions where the Cafe and check-in area will be switched and provided bag drop. There will
also
 shop at the
airport
. Meanwhile, the arrival area will be redeveloped by establishing a coffee shop and ATM Centre.
Lastly
, in the next year after arriving at the airfield, people can hire a car or taxi sited in front of the arrival gate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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