Nowadays ,more and more people are reading books and news on the internet. Is this a positve or negative development.

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these days quiet people
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to reading
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, newspapers and
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website
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their health. Almost everyone now uses social media and
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why they are well-known costless
books
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and
news
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on the
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and newspapers . On the
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hand it is true because they do not need to spend money . It is better to read free
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on the
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than to buy
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with your money.And they can spend other things there in cash.For ,example almost all the old
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love reading a newspaper in the morning and they have got mobile phones and the
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they do not need ordinary paper for reading
books
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or newspapers , On the other ,hand it is brought to a negative effect on their health . Especially to young
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and the old community.Young
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`s parents would rather read something on the
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and have their
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learn it .And
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children
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time on the
internet
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to read free
books
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and
news
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.
children
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of the world country already used to it but Uzbek people are now studying it .If
children
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don`t know
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read something on the
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a negative effect on them . In my view everyone if know amount read
news
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and
books
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they can see benefits it ,if they don`t amount it they only see a negative effect in themselves.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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