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There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how these broblems are affecting the public - suggest what changes could be made

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Dear sir, I hope
this
 letter meets you well. Let me give you a hint of what we are suffering from in our city. Each day the crowd areas increase and
accordingly
 it makes our life more difficult
by
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 time. Public transportation facilities
is
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 the main reason for that. A lot of
labors
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 are trying to find a way
going
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to go
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 from work to home but unfortunately and
due to
huge
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the huge
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 number of
labors
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 roads getting full of them between 4:00 pm
until
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 8:00 pm. In evening, they go outside
then
 road get crowded again from 9:00 pm until 11:00 pm. No buses around the city except two buses which are not helping for short and medium distances. So, the first solution is to have more buses,
however
 it needs time to change people behavior from renting a car to use the bus. The second solution is to increase awareness of rules that can decrease accidents and the crowd. Thank you for understanding and hopefully you get more solutions for
this
 issue. We need to be back for our normal life. Regards,
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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