The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise  the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table shows the information
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sales in five countries
about
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Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
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in 1999 and 2004.
According to
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table, Denmark had the highest level of
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in
coffee
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in 1999.
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the opposite, Sweden showed the lowest level of
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in 2004. In 1999, the rate of
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sale
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sales
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of
bananas
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and
coffee
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the
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Belgium and Sweden
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stayed
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1 million
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euros.
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the same scale, these two countries had not been sharply
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more
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than 1 million
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euros in 2004. To compare the standard of
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coffee
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1999 to 2000 In
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Belgium,
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the sale
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bananas
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had steadily increased
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million
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euros.
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sale
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the sale
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went up 5.5 times in the UK.
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Switzerland was a
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upward trend in the of
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from 1999 to 2004.
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Sweden dropped
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a downward trend in the
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of
bananas
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from
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1999 and 2004. In conclusion, the rate of the
sale
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coffee
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in four
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climbed and never decreased in the above table.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, sale with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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