The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

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sufficient number of fruits and vegetables in a day in

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three different years. In brief, the proportion of females was the highest position in all of the years,

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the lowest was children. Moving to the detail, the percentage of women and men shows

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difference in 2003, 2006 and 2010. Both

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women and men reached the peak in 2006 at 32% and 28% respectively. They were at the bottom position in 2003

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and increased from 25% and 22%. From the heyday, there was a slight fall in the rate of

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to 27% and 24% from 2006 to 2010.

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, the percentage of children showed

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, it was in the

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position at 11% in 2003,

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gradually increased from 11% to 16%. After that, there was a subtle decrease in the proportion of youngsters to 14% between 2006 and 2010.