The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
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whereas
the lowest was children.
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to 27% and 24% from 2006 to 2010.
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position at 11% in 2003, then
gradually increased from 11% to 16%. After that, there was a subtle decrease in the proportion of youngsters to 14% between 2006 and 2010.Submitted by shimamura0116 on
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