Some people believe watching TV is bad for children. Others believe it is a good thing. Compare these two views. Then state which view you agree with.
It is thought by some, watching
television
continuously has a negative impact on children
, whereas
others do not agree with them. Firstly
, this
essay gives detailed data about how TV can influence children
in a negative way and secondly
, some positive effects on children
.
On the one hand, technology has developed significantly over 50 years and this
development has brought tons of technology devices such
as computers, tablets and apart from those, television
can be considered as a playground for children
. Children
are likely to spend their hours in front of the television
watching cartoons and these types of entertainment programs influence children
's mental health. In addition
, they are likely to copy the behaviour of characters that they see on the television
which will affect their behaviour negatively. For example
, according to
an investigation at the Care Center in 2018 in Canada, approximately 70% of parents said that they were forced by their children
to purchase toys and clothes of cartoon characters in a single day.
On the other hand
, unlikely, the detrimental effects on children
, watching television
can assist them to improve their foreign or native language
skills. Some adventure and amusement programs consist of subtitles which will help children
to learn any language
easily. Moreover
, the languages which children
learned from television
can assist them in their educational life, because they would have a bunch of opportunities to enhance their language
skills. For instance
, according to
an experiment revealed at the WHO in 2020, children
who learned or listened to any foreign language
during their childhood, are more likely to use their ability in any case than that of other children
.
To summarize, in my opinion, children
should watch television
especially adventure or mystic programs which help to enhance the language
skills that they will use in their future life.Submitted by sahibzamanshirinov on
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