Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter •say which points in the article you agree with •explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. •offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter in reference to your recent article stating that all town centres
looks
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similar across the globe.
However
, I deny
this
statement and
reasons
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are mentioned
further
. My name is Stuti and I am
local
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resident of Baroda, India. I agree that we can find everything under one roof and I
also
agree that
this
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centres are
little
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bit expensive. But what
i
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don't agree
is
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interior
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the interior
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design,
product
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as well as
the food
is
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are
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same
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the same
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.
Firstly
, interior design at my local town
center
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is as per our
cities
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tradition and culture.
In addition
to that they have
also
kept in mind the fashion taste of the local people.
For instance
, you can find both
western
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clothes as well ethnic Indian clothes.
Last
but not
the
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least food, as countries are becoming more
diversed
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diverse
, you can find all kinds of food. Whenever you visit my city please let me know I can be your tour guide and we can explore the city. You can contact me via email at [email protected]. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Stuti Sheth
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