You recently made a journy by train. When you got on the train, you realiesd you had left a bag on the platform. Right a letter to the station manager . In your letter: give details of where and when you left the bag. describe the bag and its content suggest how you get the bag back

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Dear Sir or Madam I have recently become aware that I had left a

bag

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at the train station and I am writing to you to enquire about how I can get back the

bag

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. I am not sure about that but it will be left at the

last

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station where I was keen on the cafe shop when I met my university friend by chance and he invited me to a drink. The main characteristic of the

bag

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which distinguishes it from others is its shape, as it provides a rectangular shape with a long pair of holders above and,

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, I would like to describe its colour in Blue as I bought it in my previous journey. I think that it would be much helpful if I give more information about it, So, there is a small wallet in the

bag

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which contains 10000 dollars

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a Samsung smartphone.

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, I have a much valuable agreement about my

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business on the

bag

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, it would be much appreciated if you could let me know if I can get back the

bag

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as soon as possible. I believe that we are able to meet each other at the main train office on June 10 or if you do not have enough time you may send it to me by post service. If you need more information please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Amir

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

240 words

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You recently made a journy by train. When you got on the train, you realiesd you had left a bag on the platform. Right a letter to the station manager . In your letter: give details of where and when you left the bag. describe the bag and its content suggest how you get the bag back

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

: Write about the following topic: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.