You recently made a journy by train. When you got on the train, you realiesd you had left a bag on the platform. Right a letter to the station manager . In your letter: give details of where and when you left the bag. describe the bag and its content suggest how you get the bag back

Dear Sir or Madam I have recently become aware that I had left a
bag
at the train station and I am writing to you to enquire about how I can get back the
bag
. I am not sure about that but it will be left at the
last
station where I was keen on the cafe shop when I met my university friend by chance and he invited me to a drink. The main characteristic of the
bag
which distinguishes it from others is its shape, as it provides a rectangular shape with a long pair of holders above and,
also
, I would like to describe its colour in Blue as I bought it in my previous journey. I think that it would be much helpful if I give more information about it, So, there is a small wallet in the
bag
which contains 10000 dollars
as well as
a Samsung smartphone.
Moreover
, I have a much valuable agreement about my
last
business on the
bag
.
Hence
, it would be much appreciated if you could let me know if I can get back the
bag
as soon as possible. I believe that we are able to meet each other at the main train office on June 10 or if you do not have enough time you may send it to me by post service. If you need more information please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Amir
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