Some people say that the main environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The sustainability of

ecosystem

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, since directly determines the existence of all creatures on the Earth, has always drawn great

concerns

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concern

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from all over the world.The booming population,

however

,

together with

the deterioration of environmental circumstances, have already threatened the maintenance of ecology. Some people claim that contemporarily the major environmental problem lies in the

extinction

of certain

species

, which I strongly agree with. Diversified environmental

problems

can be observed nowadays, which are quite urgent to be solved, admittedly. The

well being

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of not only human beings

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but

also

all

species

on the Earth

rely

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relies

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greatly on the healthy operation of

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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,

hence

even a tiny problem should not be overlooked. The shortage of natural resources,the prevailing

of

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environmental

pollutions

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pollution

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,

the

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unpredictable climate change are all imminent dangers to all living creatures. It is never too cautious to focus on those potential crises to the environment. People have already taken countermeasures,

however

, to tackle the aforementioned

problems

.

The

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healthy and environmentally-friendly lifestyle has been cultivated for years,

while

countless numbers of innovative technologies have been created in order to check and balance the present situation.

Consequently

,lots of previous

problems

have been at least soothed,

while

the

extinction

of

species

, no matter

plants

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whether plants

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or animals, cannot be reversed. Once a specific type of creature is lost, it is almost impossible to save it back to

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nature. Compared to other environmental

problems

, the loss of

species

is

the

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one that human beings cannot solve up until now. Considering

from

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this

perspective, the emergency of

this

problem deserves more concentration. What is more, one of the crucial aspects of natural balance is the co-existence of diversified

species

. Once a particular kind of animal or plant is lost, the survival of other

species

may

also

be hugely influenced. The

birds

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Birds

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,

for example

, have been assumed as the most resistive type of

species

because of their flying and stronger endurance capabilities.

Due to

the deterioration of

forest

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the forest

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environment and loss of plants, huge numbers of bird

species

have

also

been

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died out. Once an irreversible

extinction

has happened, potential threats may

also

approach. In my opinion, all environmental

problems

should be given sufficient attention,

however

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once an

extinction

of a

species

emerges, it is too late to make any remedies.