The diagrams below shows incidents of theft in two states of a south American country from 1985 to 2000.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below shows incidents of theft in two states of a south American country from 1985 to 2000.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the rubbery of energy in four different countries throughout 15 years years.
It is clear that
although
proportions for theft in the US have dominated almost the whole shown period, figures which indicate stolen power in Denmark
consequently
exceeded them. In 1985, thieving energy in the United States was the highest one at 1200kw, which is triple more than Germany's.
By contrast
of them, India and Denmark's losing power was the lowest one, approximately 200kw respectively and over five years of term info reflects America has increased to a peak at over 1600kw, but
then
, they decreased regularly until the 2000s. By 2000, power thievery in Denmark had grown dramatically to its highest point at over 1600kw, which was the same as info for the US in 1990.
Besides
, the proportions for India's loss of efficiency had risen to 1200 and which was 300 less than the US in the 2000s.
Last
but not least, the least lost showed Germany within the given term, and its figures have grown to only about 900kw and
this
was even 300kw less than stolen energy in the US at the beginning of the period
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