some children spend hours every day on thair smartphones. why is this case?do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the contemporary ,world technology has considerable impacts on people's lives. Mobile calls up are a part of
this
technology with their merits and demerits. The impacts of mobile phones are becoming inferior on offspring's lives because of some reasons which will explain.
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To begin
with ,there are two main reasons for that phenomenon. Linking Words
Initially
, it's related to parent’s free time, that means these days because of the economic crisis both parents have to work, so they don't have any high-quality free time for their children in Linking Words
this
case, scion has urged to use more and more of their mobile phone. Linking Words
Subsequently
, mobile phones have some conveniences which are attractive to children. By their way of illustration, when a child uses a smartphone and plays a game or surfs on the internet he or she experiences a high level of dopamine after that fascinating experience it would be impossible to through away the phone.
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However
, like each phenomenon in the world using mobile phones have its own downsides. Linking Words
Firstly
, the investigation has proved that these days most children and teens are experiencing obesity and the main reason for Linking Words
that is
computer games and smartphones. Linking Words
Secondly
, these kinds of devices caused low levels of social skills among offspring. Linking Words
for example
, offspring do not spend much time out of the home so they could not make new friends and couldn't be a socializing person.
In conclusion, using smartphones like other parts of technology has pros and cons. I assume that the dark side of that disaster should control in some novel ways Linking Words
otherwise
, the world would witness a great portion of people in the future who will be obese, have weak eyes, and be alone in their houses.Linking Words
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