Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There are those who think that people who make houses newly have to comply with the traditional style in municipal areas,

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others consider that they have to design their own residences by themselves. Deciding whether or not it is wise to own style is subjective but for

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it can be positive. On the one hand, if new citizens follow the conventional custom to create their dwellings, it would render the scenery of the town beautiful. To be specific, it would make the local area more famous in the country.

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, one city in Kyoto decided a rule of building to oblige the traditional form in 2018, it generated some positive effects on the residents and town because it became the most popular area in Japan in 2020.

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trend would produce some beneficial results.

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, a lot of individuals build their own dwellings since they want to live in their

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houses. It means that house owners design what they would like to do in their own residences. To illustrate, many families attach a garden

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their houses to

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their hope

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as playing with their children or watching nature.

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, if newcomers are able to erect their

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freely, they can design what they like. In my view, it depends on what house the person like to live in. There is no specific residence that fits everyone, and I think if individuals think that harmony with other residents is more essential than their

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, they should comply

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house, and vice versa. In conclusion, there are pros and cons

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traditional custom and own style. It depends on the individual’s choice.

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, people have to consider what they want to obtain from their own buildings.

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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that the amount of noise people may have to be controlled strictly. Others, however, say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.**To what extent do you agree with this statement?