Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Many
countries
all over the world are all more and more similar to each other due to
globalization. It also
affects the products
because now products
of a local country could be found in every corner of the world. And in my opinion, I think this
distribution could bring some advantages in development.
People
always searching for new experiences, it can come from a lot of activities but most of them would rather choose to try some things that come from foreign countries
like their products
. In this
way, people
can learn about the culture and cuisine of other places. Help to connect people
from around the world. For example
, Western people
usually buy Asian ingredients in grocery stores because they want to try new things but occasionally they want to cook dishes from the ingredients to taste and learn about the history behind it.
Moreover
, the demand for trading among the countries
will open a new opportunity for transport industries . And it helps investors to earn benefits from the investment for potential transport companies. Finally
, it can help a country to develop its economy by collaborating with other developed nations in transportation. To illustrate, farm products
and seafood in Vietnam now can be imported into some developed countries
in order to improve the relationship and economy of Vietnam
In conclusion, I think the idea of countries
sharing the same product is brilliant. It motivates the development of transportation and can contribute to the economy of a nation.Submitted by amusetour14 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite