You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire if you would be so generous as to provide me with some information about your

sports

club

. I am a first-year student and

resideing

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residing

in a hostel

that is

adjacent to your

club

. I have a great interest in play and was the captain of my school's volleyball team. Unfortunately, our college or hostel does not offer

sports

and recreational facilities. Seeing my disappointment, one of our seniors recommended your

club

; which is why I am curious to know about your esteemed

sports

centre. I would appreciate

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it if

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you could provide some information about the basic facilities offered here.

Additionally

, I would like to know the age bracket and skill level of your members to better understand the

club

environment. Can you

also

share the

sports

club

fee details to make my decision of availing

your

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of your

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services a little easier? I hope my requests did not inconvenience you so much. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Pooja

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