Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that some
people
believe the best way to blend each other with different ages and cultures is through music
. I will detail the reasons why I can only partially agree with this
statement.
To begin
with, music
is a language. Every place in this
world has its own melody. Music
is a way to express feelings such
as happiness and sadness. In Indonesia, we are standing from many tribes, every tribe has its traditional music
but those tribes can be united with a national song. The national song reminds us how our history is made, how we got our freedom, and how we are grateful for everything we have in our land. For illustrate, every people
in every in Indonesia will sing the National Song every Monday during the Flag ceremony so that society always remembers that we are one.
However
, not everyone loves the same kind of music
. Some people
just like particular music
. For instance
, young people
love K-pop but the older community loves classic music
. The different tastes in music
can bring some problems because not everyone enjoys the same genre. Other people
even do not like to listen to music
because they prefer a silent moment for themselves.
To conclude
, music
brings happiness to everyone. It can make people
cry, laugh, and smile. Music
is memories, every people
have their own story. On the other hand
, some people
do not have the same thought about music
. They do not enjoy the same genre and do not get the joy of it.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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