To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
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insects
while
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nature
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of nature
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insects
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encouraging
people
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. On top of that is
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insects
very dangerous more than people
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insects
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been discussed
food
sources will have pros and cons. People
should have further
information about the food
, special the food
from insects
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