The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attractions in Britain in the year 1999.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attractions in Britain in the year 1999.
The chart below depicts the outcomes of a survey of individuals who visited four kinds of tourist attractions in England in 1999.
Overall
,
theme
parks
were the most popular destinations among people,
whereas
wildlife
parks
and zoos were the least popular. Among all the
theme
parks
, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was visited by the most individuals,
while
Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor were visited by the fewest. Based on the pie chart, nearly 38% of the total visitors choose to visit
theme
parks
. And museums & galleries were not far behind;
hence
, they were visited by 37% of the people.
However
, historic houses & monuments and wildlife
parks
& zoos were least visited by visitors; 16% and 9% of total visitors went to these places, respectively. As per the table, out of all the
theme
parks
, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was visited by 47% of the population. The Alton Towers and Pleasureland in Southport were able to attract almost the same number of people, 17% and 16%, respectively.
On the contrary
, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor were only visited by 10% of the individuals.
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