It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening.

It is argued that disappear of

animals

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species

is

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occured

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occurs

naturally as part of the cycle of

ecoystem

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ecosystem

, and individuals should

accepet

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accept

this

issue without trying to prevent it. I totally disagree with

this

statement, because I believe the major reason behind

extinct

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of some

animals

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specise

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species

is human

activites

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activities

activity

.

To begin

with, there are various reasons why I hold the idea that humans are the first responsible about damage

animals

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life.

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,

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deforestation is the main cause of

this

issue, because

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people

cut down the forest in order to make food,

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. As result a,

animals

loss

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their habitats and

this

have

negtiave

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negative

effects

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animals

and lead them to extinct.

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, poaching

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kills

animals

for food or entertainment purposes, which contributes to

declines

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the

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number of

animals

and

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up

to

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extinction.

Finally

, the industrial revolution of humans , which means

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the

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number of factories and all forms of transport namely, vehicles, air

plane

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, because

this

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factors increase the

pollutions

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in all forms including, air, water,

noise

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.

Thus

, increase the amount of CO2 footprint In the atmosphere and lead to

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rise

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the

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temperature of

earth

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as well as

climate change and

globa

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global

warming. If the

the

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earth

get

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warmer the

animals

find challenges to adapt

with

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this bad circumstances

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, which will

can

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cause

to

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extinct

animals

.

On the other hand

, I believe there are many reasons

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that motivate

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people

to protect

animals

from extinction.

First,

we need

animals

in medical research in order to trial

a new drugs

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, which can assist to improve

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people

health and life expectancy.

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reason, we require

animals

in

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for

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basic needs

such

as

,

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production

food

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of food

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,

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and fruniture

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fruniture

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furniture

.

To sum up

, It seems to me that disappear of

animals

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species is not

natural

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a natural

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process , and I explained Why happened, and why

people

should protect

animals

.