It is argued that disappear of
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species
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naturally as part of the cycle of
, and individuals should
this
issue without trying to prevent it. I totally disagree with
this
statement, because I believe the major reason behind
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of some
animalsFix the agreement mistake
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is human
.
To begin
with, there are various reasons why I hold the idea that humans are the first responsible about damage
animalsChange noun form
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life.
Firstly
,
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deforestation is the main cause of
this
issue, because
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people
cut down the forest in order to make food,
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. As result a,
animals
lossReplace the word
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their habitats and
this
have
effects
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animals
and lead them to extinct.
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, poaching
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kills
animals
for food or entertainment purposes, which contributes to
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theChange preposition
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number of
animals
and
endCorrect subject-verb agreement
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up
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extinction.
Finally
, the industrial revolution of humans , which means
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number of factories and all forms of transport namely, vehicles, air
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, because
thisChange the determiner
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factors increase the
pollutionsFix the agreement mistake
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in all forms including, air, water,
noiseCorrect word choice
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.
Thus
, increase the amount of CO2 footprint In the atmosphere and lead to
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riseChange the verb form
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temperature of
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as well as
climate change and
warming. If the
the Remove the redundancy
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earth
getChange the verb form
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warmer the
animals
find challenges to adapt
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this bad circumstancesChange the determiner
this bad circumstance
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, which will
can Remove a modal verb
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cause
toCorrect pronoun usage
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extinct
animals
.
On the other hand
, I believe there are many reasons
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people
to protect
animals
from extinction.
First,
we need
animals
in medical research in order to trial
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, which can assist to improve
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people
health and life expectancy.
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reason, we require
animals
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basic needs
such
as
,Remove the comma
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production
foodChange preposition
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,
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.
To sum up
, It seems to me that disappear of
animalsChange the noun form
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species is not
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process , and I explained Why happened, and why
people
should protect
animals
.