“Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place”

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and office. It is creating an image with other families. when you stay at

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you feel better. As like as you think in your workplace. your organized desk carries forward your personality. In my ,opinion

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should keep

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habit for all

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prefer their

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furniture do set up in the right places in their

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some

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keep clean and well set up in their working place.

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essay will be discussed in brief why it is important to keep organized in the

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and workplace. For some

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a messy

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makes a good impression on friends and families.

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, where I live, I try to set up furniture in the right place in my

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you will see a show rack in front of my

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a sofa set in the drawing room, a Showcase and TV in the living area, dining table and chair set up in the dining place beside of kitchen. ,

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bed, dressing table and Almira set in the master bedroom.

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, another room set of furniture is in my child's room. In my ,view

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should keep organized in their homes.

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, my workplace must be tidy so everything is organized I think I can do more work. I can do

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work because all my time is for my work. I have kept on office materials on the desk.

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as a laptop, diary, pen, stapler, calculator, storage box and water pot etc. After ,all

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keep clean in their desks. In conclusion, in my ,

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I like to keep organized.it is good for my health and makes me feel fresh in my mind.

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I like to organize and keep office materials. Maybe both are good and feel fresh at different times and with different

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