“Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place”

some communities think that everything should keep rightly placed in the

home

and office. It is creating an image with other families. when you stay at

home

you feel better. As like as you think in your workplace. your organized desk carries forward your personality. In my ,opinion

people

should keep

this

habit for all

people

. some

people

prefer their

home

furniture do set up in the right places in their

home

. ,

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some

people

also

keep clean and well set up in their working place.

This

essay will be discussed in brief why it is important to keep organized in the

home

and workplace. For some

people

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a messy

home

makes a good impression on friends and families.

For example

, where I live, I try to set up furniture in the right place in my

home

. When you enter the

home

you will see a show rack in front of my

home

then

a sofa set in the drawing room, a Showcase and TV in the living area, dining table and chair set up in the dining place beside of kitchen. ,

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bed, dressing table and Almira set in the master bedroom.

Moreover

, another room set of furniture is in my child's room. In my ,view

people

should keep organized in their homes.

Accordingly

, my workplace must be tidy so everything is organized I think I can do more work. I can do

this

work because all my time is for my work. I have kept on office materials on the desk.

such

as a laptop, diary, pen, stapler, calculator, storage box and water pot etc. After ,all

people

also

keep clean in their desks. In conclusion, in my ,

home

I like to keep organized.it is good for my health and makes me feel fresh in my mind.

As well as

I like to organize and keep office materials. Maybe both are good and feel fresh at different times and with different

people

.