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the diagram below show how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer

the diagram below show how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer
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The given diagram illustrates information on the
process
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 of converting organic
waste
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in to
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 fertilizer.
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, it is clearly seen that there are 5 stages in total, starting with the preparation of
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container
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, and ending with the finished compost. First of all, the recycling
process
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 begins with preparing a large plastic
container
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, which
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the
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 capacity should be at least 200 litter.
This
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container
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 needs to have holds on its sides which support the air movement in and out. In the next steps, the
waste
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 which needed to recycle will be put into the
container
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 following separated layers. Leftover is the first layer
with
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15
centimeters
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 thick;
next,
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it is 15
centimeters
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 height of herbages, and
then
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paper
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 is placed on top of the other
waste
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. In the third step, hot water and nitrogen are added; afterwards, the
container
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 is closed with a lid to create a suitable environment to start the decomposition. During the decomposition
process
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, the heat from the reaction will
escapes
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 through the holes.
This
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process
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 will need at least 6 months to convert
waste
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 materials to
the
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fertilizer so that they can be used to compost the plants.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, waste, container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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