the diagram below show how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer
The given diagram illustrates information on the
process
of converting organic waste
in to
fertilizer. Join the words
into
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are 5 stages in total, starting with the preparation of container
, and ending with the finished compost.
First of all, the recycling Correct article usage
the container
process
begins with preparing a large plastic container
, which Add a missing verb
has the
the
capacity should be at least 200 litter. Correct article usage
a
This
container
needs to have holds on its sides which support the air movement in and out. In the next steps, the waste
which needed to recycle will be put into the container
following separated layers. Leftover is the first layer with
15 Change preposition
apply
centimeters
thick; Change the spelling
centimetres
next,
it is 15 centimeters
height of herbages, and Change the spelling
centimetres
then
paper
is placed on top of the other Add an article
the paper
waste
.
In the third step, hot water and nitrogen are added; afterwards, the container
is closed with a lid to create a suitable environment to start the decomposition. During the decomposition process
, the heat from the reaction will escapes
through the holes. Change the verb form
escape
This
process
will need at least 6 months to convert waste
materials to the
fertilizer so that they can be used to compost the plants.Correct article usage
apply
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